Awesome...
You are an extremely talented artist. I loved the visuals and overall atmosphere to this piece. It's obvious that your art is stronger than your animation, but that can be improved with time (and you did say this is old; maybe you've gotten better).
Great choices of music (hehe), but I feel like their transitions weren't very smooth. Of course, I'll take into account that this isn't a finished submission, but it's pretty good, and I'm sure with extra work it could be amazing. Kind of wished the beginning with my song lasted longer :P
I love the scene in space. The music worked perfectly with it; probably the most beautiful part in the film.
Overall an awesome work... It's too bad you're not planning on finishing it :(
Easily the best submission I've seen featuring my music :)