Well, I hope you got a good grade on the project.
Its good for a school project, but not very polished. A new mike might help with the audio, but there is really nothing you could do to make sunscreen interesting to the NG populace. You do seem to be good at drawing/tracing(?) so try something else.
haha indeed, i do realize sunscreen isn't a very appealing topic but i just wanted to know what everyone else thought.
Thanks!
Well-done (no pun intended) movie.
Impressive, very impressive. You certainly know how to draw, though I can't say I liked your style of art all that much. It was still good, with solid animation. The sound, however, needs some work. I realize you did all the voicework yourself and I should cut you some slack for that, but some of the voices were incredibly hard to hear; you may not be able to act, but we should at least be able to hear you. I was fairly pleased by the music you used; not bad at all. So, a good, short flash animation with plenty of potential. You are one to watch, good sir. Oh, by the way, you misspelled 'wear' on the sign telling us to 'where' our sunscreen.
Yeah the voice work when u recorded was interrupted by my computers fan, so i turned it down so u couldnt hear it, i dont know if that worked or not, but oh well.
Thanks
Cute!
I thought it was cute! However, be sure to note the difference between 'wear' and 'where.' WEAR Sunscreen.
Haha yes i do see my stupidity and i will change it, thank you.
Good art
That's it. So you can draw like Jhonen Vasquez...big deal. Your movie was retarded, and came to me as more of an insult to the greatness that is Invader Zim than a tribute.
And you had four words in your "moral" and still were able to fuck it up in multiple ways, both grammatically and spelling-wise. Do you seriously not know the difference between "where" and "wear"? That's pitiful, even if you're not a native speaker.
Next time, don't ruin something so awesome with your idiocy.
Someone get of the wrong side of the bed 2day cranky pants? Would you like your bottle back?
Not Bad..
I liked the Art style, though was'ent that funny. But still not a bad job..
I do agree, Thanks.