that was awesome...
totally cool enough to get some high rating, awesome try for for a second movie..... it was really.......and rather good improvement u got there, hope to see more for your amazing style movies :)
Reviews for "Retriver 1"
It was okay.
The animation wasn't so good, but it had consistency and a good plotline.
The Loading Screen Text
...is fucked up! Lol thats not proper English o.O It should say
"When an item is stonlen, whether it is owned by the police, or the criminals... There will be one who will take it back!"
:)
Also he says "His corpose hasn't been seen". It should be corpse, not corpose.
Oh, and, a severed arm isn't exactly suitable for all ages! This should be 13+.
I felt you used to much grey in most of the scenes, especially the indoors ones, there were moments when it looked great (when the robber guy had a silhoette and a white light on his back, and others where it was a let down :(
Not bad for a second flash.
There were some parts that had good quality but sometimes it went all out of whack. Like the fingers when the guy dropped the.... whatever it was. The backgrounds weren't bad. just work on character animation more and try to make things not as messy.
But overall good job for you second.
Hmmm ok
Like it was okay but not very much detail
But i did like the animation :)
Just keep up the hard work :D