Nice preview
I'm watering at the mouth with anticipation of what the real thing is actually all about - just what a preview should be.
You've done good work with the graphics and some great additions to the joke department have made this a flash to remember.
Just how long is it going to be before we see the finished article (and my review for it)?
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Well thanks for reviewing. It's still going to be awhile before it's out though. Due to... lazyness. Lol, anyway, it'll get finished, just don't hold your breath yet.
Nice music
The sound suited it pretty well, but unfortunatly this was not enough to redeem its rather lacking in quality animation and graphics.
Graphics -5
Some of it was nice, i like the green bars like old school computer games but the gradients and colours on some of the characters were not so nice :(
Style- 3
There wasnt really much style, the character designs are over used but the way you did the green outlines was really effective Nice one on that :)
Overall not a bad start, it is just lacking animation and backgrounds.
Well, the backgrounds aren't a huge deal in this cartoon honestly, mainly because they're in one of those "old school" computer game style worlds with limited lines. Glad you liked the green outlines though.
Excellent!
Excellent! I really like it. Any idea on when the whole thing will be released? I really like pong. He kind of looks like an electrical outlet. I've been looking at your other cartoons and animations and they're all really good. It may not be the best of animation, but thats not what counts. I enjoy the humor on a lot of them. I thought maybe you could put a little diversity in your cartoons and make an african american character or somthing. Up to you. Overall this cartoon is pretty good. I also anticipate the release of a lone part 2. Dont know if he can heal himself out of the head shot.
Lol, awesome a devoted fan! :) Well, lone part 2 has been started, I don't know when I'll finish. I have gotten about 1/3 of the way done with Tetris Unleashed 3. About Pong looking like an electrical outlet, that was unintentional, it just sort of happened, lol. About an african american character, well, I told myself after creating Kortni the Goth that I wouldn't make anymore characters main characters, I could feature an african american character in an upcoming episode, it's definitely not out of the realm of possiblity, but I won't be making any more main characters unless I absolutely have to (which probably wont happen). Anyway, thx for reviewing, and keep an eye out for Lone Part 2 and TU3! =D
This should probably be an alpha, but good job man
go easy on the music though, use something like''in dream'' it's a good suspense song (techno).
Thx, but I know that like no one goes to the NG Mag, so I made it a preview instead. Thx for reviewing.
Good but...
I think that there are some improvements needed like um...well you know wth...oh forget it...but yeah I want to see the real deal man! Good luck.
Thanks for the suggestions? I guess... Anyway, thanks for reviewing.