Eh
Well, it needs improvement, but it looks promising.
Reviews for "BTA Collection: Viruses"
Zornkatzu responds:
Thanks for the review.
what the hell?
realy short, not too good graphics and was that guy a wizard?
Zornkatzu responds:
Thanks for the review. Good or bad, I like to get feedback.
Its true that the flash video is very short. I was going to put the collection together as one large flash, but I no longer have Flash 8 (only MX) so it would cause some major issues.
Oh, and the character you speak of is Black Mage from FINAL FANTASY I.
There is a tradition on NG...
...whereby if you are the final voter, the 200th person, who gets the 'Saviour' video when the movie is protected, that you review it... So I will.
It shows some potential with a little humour and theres noting wrong with what little there was, but really there is not much to it. You should have submitted a small collection of them or made this one longer. It is not really as described in your notes as there is only a single sprite. It would be much better if you told people what to do to prevent this catastrophe occuring- a humourous, imaginary anti-virus program would be OK, watch it splat the wizard guy.
I always feel a little embarassed when I am told I am the Saviour when I actually blammed something- Well I gave it 1/5 and I think you know you were lucky to scrape through. If I were a statwhore I would have voted 0 and I might have made all the difference.
Anyhow you made it- count yourselves lucky and please make the rest of the series with a bit more time, patience and effort.
There is nothing wrong with Flash MX, I never use any of the features of Flash 8! GEt some experience now on NG. Get some inspiration and read some of the tutorials here as well. Come back with length, style, detail, story, humour and proper credits. then watch your scores rise!
Best Wishes,
Ice