It was good
In the beginning, it was really relaxed. i liked it. but once it hit 14 seconds into the music and the instruments or whatever started playing minors, it didn't feel right.
for me, the introductions of the minors and (especially) the combination of the 'rap-like' theme (you can really hear it at 01:09) kinda killed the relaxation. It ruined the mood.
If you had kept the mood consistent from beginning to end (that relaxing feeling at the beginning) i would have given you a full score. But i suppose you were focusing on the fusion of the 'relaxing' and 'rap-like' bits.
But this is just me. plus, i still gave you the 8/10 stars for doing well in creating this music.
Well, anyway, good job.