Short and sweet
Very nice job on this peice. While not overly orginal, the strings in the background make it truly yours.
Orginality -- This strikes me as a song fit for an RPG, sadly not many RPGs deliver a diverse selection of music (save for the big titles such as Chrono Trigger/Cross, FF series, ect.)
Diversirty -- I agree with the previous review. Drums would add much to this song as long as you don't over do them. A good score here.
Clarity -- The end of the song loops rather poorly, sadly, for a song ment to loop. You reciverd lower marks for this only, otherwise the sound was crisp and clear.
Effort -- I understand how hard making a music track is, and you've preformed quite well, although your talent is just beginning, you've managed to impress me quite steadfastly. Bravo.
Overall -- A 7 is well deserved by this peice, you've done quite wll, and I would be honoured to add this peice to the upcoming Legend Studio's project; 'The Heart of a Lion'. Email zachorem@hotmail.com with your allowence/denial of permission to have this song used. Thank you, and excellent job. My cudos to you.