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Reviews for "A Weary Heart (A Short Loop)"

Sad

Man that had me reaching for the tissues (not in the sick way..you pervs) I liked the general feel of the guitar and the flute, they work well together, and the subtle strings in the background. It could have benefitted from better mixing, so maybe send your files to someone to mix in future. And maybe read up on some looping tutorials, there's a bit of a skip. Other than that, twas real nice.

SuperTonic64 responds:

...I can actually send my stuff to people who can mix it for me? :O (I really had no clue... I've always done it myself. :P)

As you can tell, I'm a horrible looper, but the only way to get it right is to try. I'll start reading up on looping tutorials, so my next repeating submissions won't skip. ;)

Thanks for the review! ^_^ *blows nose on a tissue* *has a cold though :P*

Short and sweet

Very nice job on this peice. While not overly orginal, the strings in the background make it truly yours.

Orginality -- This strikes me as a song fit for an RPG, sadly not many RPGs deliver a diverse selection of music (save for the big titles such as Chrono Trigger/Cross, FF series, ect.)

Diversirty -- I agree with the previous review. Drums would add much to this song as long as you don't over do them. A good score here.

Clarity -- The end of the song loops rather poorly, sadly, for a song ment to loop. You reciverd lower marks for this only, otherwise the sound was crisp and clear.

Effort -- I understand how hard making a music track is, and you've preformed quite well, although your talent is just beginning, you've managed to impress me quite steadfastly. Bravo.

Overall -- A 7 is well deserved by this peice, you've done quite wll, and I would be honoured to add this peice to the upcoming Legend Studio's project; 'The Heart of a Lion'. Email zachorem@hotmail.com with your allowence/denial of permission to have this song used. Thank you, and excellent job. My cudos to you.

SuperTonic64 responds:

Thanks for the awesome review! :)

Yeah, I still don't know how to loop well. :P I'm working on it, and hopefully I will be able to fix some of those problems associated with bad looping skills! :D

I'll check out your offer, okay? :) (Thanks again! ^_^)

You've got to make this longer!!

That was amazing, if only it were longer. If you ever decide to make an extended version, you should put some drums in where the song ended.

I really liked the flute and the guitar a lot, they sounded so sad together. Kinda reminds me of a song of mine called peaceful sleep. This song would sound good in an RPG... but end credits or a game over screen are good ideas also.

I hope to hear a longer version!!

Good job.. 5/5 and a download!!!
Feel free to check out my music.

SuperTonic64 responds:

Maybe I will make a longer version! (I've been working on how to write percussion parts anyways, so maybe I will giveit a shot. :D)

To tell you the truth, I did write this for a RPG! :D But I will do something to try to make it better though. :)

Thanks for the review! ^_^