Good potental....
the only thing you need to improve on is mario's sprite....hes too bright/white
Reviews for "Mario of MK - #1"
Diki responds:
That's because I used the Gameboy Advance Sprite.
nice
Keep it up i can't wait for the next one!!! it's makes my mario movie look like crap!!!
Nice job for your first sprite movie!
For a first time sprite movie, it was very good.
Here are some things I liked about your movie:
1. The sprites were well done. I'm not a flash programmer so I don't know much about them, but I know they were some of the better sprites.
2. I found it amusing when he used the bomb to blast himself up and didn't get hurt. Clever idea
3. The sound was decent and fit with what was going on.
However, to be of some help to you, I offer these things as advice:
1. It seemed a bit slow at times. The intro and the various scenes seemed to be drawn out. I realize that stuff doesn't have to happen really fast, but perhaps picking up the pace at some parts would help.
2. The story, although different, could use a bit more to it. I'd like to see something besides the normal mario beats up bomb or bowser thing. Not sure if you have more planned - so if you do ignore this part.
3. The fighting scene could have used a bit more to it. Maybe add a bit more attacks or variation. Critical hit of 999 was kind of over the top, too xP (even though I was amused by it).
In conclusion, nice job on your first sprite movie. It was a good submission and I look forward to seeing what you have to offer in future works. 7/10
Very good
this was a grate flash i wouldn't be surprised if it got an award you should join Off the Wall Productions.
Private message me if you think you might be interested!
it's okay i guess
Pretty good job for sprites. The best part i think is your music, it was good to hear something different in a sprite movie. My biggest suggestion would be to make the next one longer, have the whole story in one movie, or something important in the episode. This was kind of boring because nothing much happened. Good idea with the FF fight style, though a bit long. Other than that, it wasn't much different from other sprite movies. Maybe try being a bit more original, even if it is kind of limited. But good job in the all, it was fun to watch...keep working on it :)