Pretty bad
Good: Nothing really except the style. It was a flash that cares about the world. You don't see much of those.
Improvement: The graphics and the animation. The graphics was very 2D. Try to make it look 3D. The animation was all bad tweening. Make it look good. Add some violence like the Earth blowing up. Also, the sound quality was bad. Try to fix that. Also, try to somehow put hunor in it.
Overall: It was caring but it was presented badly.
2/5
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Well, it's a shame that you didn't like it, oh well. I don't really know where the Earth blowing up or humor would fit in. It wouldn't suit the flash, that in all the seriousness of this flash a random gag wouldn't work. Well, thx for the review anyway.
Allo chap,
file>publish settings>audioStream(set)>bitR ate(160 kps)>publish
thatlle make the sound quality better. :)
Ok. I gave it a terrible review because the graphics were very bad and so was the sound and music. But, I will say that youve got creativity. Because obviously all this stuff came out of yur head. I don't know if any of it was any good, but practice makes perfect, I swear. Keep submitting flashes, and keep studying music and flash authors. You'lle get it down. :)
Thx for the advice and the review. I just tried it on the flash, and it just made the file size larger with no obvious effects on the sound :( oh well. I think it's not the recording, but the recording equipment. Let's just say I ain't exactly proffessional, and leave it there.
Thanks for your comments, I'm gonna try to submit more flashes soon. :D
bah
it touch the heart but the drawing is crapy and the music boring it don't belong to ng such a message
Glad it touched your heart, sorry you didn't like anything else about it, thx for the review.
I gave it a 5 hoping
it will stay on NG. I applaud you for your efforts in opening peoples eyes to what we (US) are doing to the world. You have good vision.
I wanted to make a Global Warming flash for a while, but there were no good suitable songs on NG, so I used one of my own. Thx for the review.