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^^Good Points^^
This movie was actually pretty entertaining for the length that it had. I thought it was really funny how you wrote in the diary that "things weren't so bad" and then when you actually animated them they were much worse. The bleeding part was the best though, that made me laugh. The sound effects were perfect too.
^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics could definitely use improving. You had a lot of bitmap images, which were very pixilated, and didn't look good with Flash drawings on top of them.