ummmmmmmm..........yeah
Where to start......oh..where to start....Bad graphics....no sound except music.....not even any humor...come on if a flash is going to be bad at least have some humor in it...
Constructive criticism is hard because there is so much to fix you know what do this....scrap this flash and start over, spend more time on animation, voices, music that helps the flash not hurts it, and for my sanity a better storyline. JUST START OVER
ummmmmmmmmm...yeah. were the start, Oh where to start, No. Fuck off.
dude!
compress it!!!!! that entry did not deserve 9mb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry...
Try to improve
The graphics were lame, at least try to color the people in. The conversation frames went way to fast for me to read, except for like 2 of them.
Sorry, The Animation Was Short: i Forgot to Export the SWF. Sorry. Watch it now, it's longer, and if you had watched the other 2 THEY ARE CHALK!!!!!!!!!