Hey man!
Pretty nice work you've done so far!
I like the sound you used around the start it made the song seem very upbeat. The bass was hard too, which is good. I would recommend maybe a tad smoother one though for this type of song, i mean, yours sounds untuned, you know? Rough even. Same hardness, just a tad smoother, it would make the song sound.. more pleasant i guess xD
The main lead was good too!
The only thing though was that it was at a pretty high octave.. It sounded like somekind of 'screaching' or something. Maybe lower the octave or try another lead.
Other then that, its really good! Keep it up man! :D
Beats4Beets. <(^.^<)