Not bad.
But Zhuriel seemed like he didn't play in the right scale, just a couple of notes out of place. Cowdog2, I like yours a tab better, pretty much because you didn't rely on tricks (I.E. Tremolo bar, kill switch). Zhuriel, you need to work on your techniques a little more. The whammy bar is cool and all, but don't use it too much. Same for killswitch. Take a little bit of music theory. Look at some lessons online and learn scales. You seem like the kind of person who doesn't do that kind of stuff.
I give it to Cowdog2