Excellent review. I recommend that viewers check "READ ALL REVIEWS" in order to view it.
I'm going to follow likewise with my own opinions.
1) The judge's exaggerated head movements: An interesting add-on. Was it your intention to make him look melodramatic?
2) O.o Wow... if she did that, my question is if she could play a tune with it there. Or for the sake of crude hilarity and historical-linguistically crude hilarity, play a tune on it using a fart (In several Indo-European languages in Europe, there is a word that means "to fart" which, in other Indo-European languages, means "to play the flute")
3) WHAT THE HELL?
4) YES. YES. YES. YES. YES. Hilarious and inspiring.
5) *dies* Perfect characters.
6) The Kid should be the one saying the whole thing except the "WHEE-HA". Maybe (for the sake of ridiculousness) have Meekins do that? Von Karma's reaction is perfectly fitting.
7) Unnecessary and annoying.
8) Um... riiiiiiiight...
9) Interesting idea for Von Karma. Good.
10) *runs scared*
11) ... Bizarre. Not bad.
12) Right character for the lines.
13) What was she saying?