A solid 9! Almost 10!
This is great man, I love it. Your effects, blending, and all the sounds.... Just amazing!
I also read your little voice post, and I think it's great that you turned a funny inside joke into such an astonishing song. The only ONLY reason you don't get a 10 from me is because the voice in the beginning was kind of annoying at first, although it did blend nicely into the song at later parts, and then it sounded awesome. so you get a 5/5. I can't really think if anything to improve on, the EARNED it's spot in the top tracks of all time.
Keep up the good work friend, It's nice to have someone in this community with real talent. I hope to see more of your songs in the top tracks of all time.