I'm sorry to vote low...
For the lack of quality anything, the file size of this movie was way to big. I don't know how you managed to make it so large, but much better work has been submitted that was way lower in file size. I am not going to blam this, simply because I believe you tried hard on this and I'm a nice guy. But while I know little about flash, you need to learn how to condense these things. Practice some more, and good luck to you in the future.