Reviews for Escape The Bedroom Part 1

[dragonjet]

good start my friend

listen here people!
it's his first time to make a flash game,
took him only 8 hours to finish it,
he's using a free flash designer softeware,
he is a filipino, and take note:
hes only 13 years old
and he completed a non-noobish game!

oh hell his graphics are way better than my games'
pretty good game for a first flash. nice start.
better than other first timers out there.

dont get discouraged by the dark forces out there
its also one thing i like from you,
you're still determined even if others give you zeros
everybody went through this ya know...

oh and you CAN have flash 9, ill pm you...

Disco-PiggyHammy responds:

Thanks dude! dragonjet wow thats great! thanks for the review and youll PM me flash 9? wow! thanks again for the review and gave me humor 5 too for the Sadako thing right? or is it the others? still thanks! and also may the force be with you , me and all the people!

[VagrantChick]

anticipating the second round...

To make text more readable you need to contrast colors. Because your pictures had a lot of blue in them (dark) orange would be a good contrasting color to use. [purple/yellow, blue/orange, red/green; in art class they call these complementary colors] You might want to try editing/enhancing pictures before you add text (example: slightly blur the area where you are going to add text.) the sound loop that you chose is not "rip-my-brain-out" annoying [BONUS!]. Since you already explained that this was a rough product, you don't have to put those details in the game, but your additions like the "dream" show that you have creativity and potential. i'll be watching for your submissions in the future.

Disco-PiggyHammy responds:

Thank you for your review, ill fix them next time and part 2 could be better and the best version will be v2.00 and the special edition will be v3.00, 2 will be on 2007 of january, thank you for your nice review, its nice enough you didnt gave me a 0

[zarboff2121]

Needs much improovement.

Good concept. Needs better presentation. Grammer problems. Too much wining about how your only 13, and you worked 8 hours. Good idea to use real pictures. I found a bug too, when I found the laundry there was no way to go back or leave that screen. Your drawings were terrible I mean im 14, And mine are a million times better. You must have no experience. There are art tutorials on this site also Action script ones so check them out. Good Luck, Nubby.

Disco-PiggyHammy responds:

sorry for the winings, for people who say I can't affored Flash Maker 9 is that I CANT REALLY AFFORED IT! here, it cost 1500 Pesos, thats alot of money for us in the philipines kids, maybe if i grew older, I can affored it, for now ill try my best on my alligator flash maker

[RandomStar]

It was okay

I like the idea, though you could make it better (perhaps not with that program, but if you got a better one). Instead of having a big button saying: "Look under the bed" or something like that, make a piece of the background into a clickable button that takes you under the bed.

[MajorJakobs]

I JUST LOST MY LUNCH!

I have played some really bad games, but honestly, what were you thinking??? No offence, this just sucked hard.

Disco-PiggyHammy responds:

sorry for it sucked hard, ill try harder next time and also a story