I appreciate the effort, but -
I see that you actually put effort in, and I saw the places where you were going for humour, and you were very nearly there. But it just wasn't funny :(
I was a little bit emo in my day, and I don't get offended by people poking fun at emos. Honestly, it's a movement that sets itself up for mockery, and as part of that movement, it's something you have to accept. But if you're going to make fun of emos, do it right. It has to actually be amusing.
The drawings weren't bad though, and the Reel big fish song wasn't a bad move, but the rest just wasn't up to scratch. Sorry.