Good job, for a sprite movie
I liked that. Even though it was the 128th last submitted flash movie. I wonder why it didn't pass before.
Anyway, you did the graphics pretty good. No just the amateur style. And your custom chars. They were well done too. I liked your voice acting. I find the English accent gives it an extra bit of humor. Like at the last bit. A good job. I might like to see another, if you can. Keep working on it.