crafted like a mstr
i enjoy the drawing and animation style, as well as the humour in it. i may be dumb but i didn't see the ending coming at all. i was laughing a lot.
me like the squarehead a lot, and i hope you like my review even though i am new.
LOL
i sure do like your reviewing
thanks
No it wasn't pointless!
short and funny- it was exactly as you described it and in a very sick way it made me laugh.
The animation was everything it needed to be and the art was OK.
The voice acting was fine and the sound was clear.
I would make the music slightly quieter, personallym although there was nothing wrong with it.
It would be nice if you put in a background- a park, a playground, whatever.
I thought there was a couple of levels of humour there- I mean, the opening question - are you...? as if there was any doubt!
and Dodgeball...as if!
then the legs waggling in the air!
thanks for the feedback
Lol
Short story, kinda pointless, but still it was kinda funny lol
im glad you enjoyed it
Bwah ha ha!
I started laughing really hard when the kid with HUGE HEAD SAID YES TO DODGEBALL!
I think you should edit this toon:
- Cut the part where square-head falls over
- End the movie with square head in a dodgeball scene... losing miserably, but happy he's been included.
That's my cents!
Keep up the style!
lol, thanks for the advice
maybe i should have, but i didnt want the end to be happy for this one
thanks again
Saw it coming.
I saw the ending coming. The way tha the kid kept looking up, and moving backwards. Otherwise it was good.
hmm, next time i wont make it so obvious
thanks for the feedback