This will probably actually be a semi succesful group. You actually have good art skillz and good animation skillz. This one was pretty good. It has a nice story and good use of speakonia. And a good add on how the locked clocks would move when they talked. Better than a spike moving.
Well that wasnt a locked clock. If it was a locked clock the lock would be on the outside and the clock would be on the inside instead of vice versa. Also it would be nice if you hasd a background. Oh and a link to your site.