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Reviews for "HALO sprite wars online 1"

Not bad

It's hilarious that I know Alan though. Great job, just like him XD.

fish-orb responds:

lol

Not bad for a first. :)

Could be done better but since it's your first, it's pretty good.

Hope you make more. :)

fish-orb responds:

dont worrie ep 2 is on the way as soon as i learn to do a desent background

Not very good.

The sprites were good, but the whole concept was stupid. In a real mmo (Planetside being the most comparable to Halo) there wouldn't be a guy comin in at the last minute to save you, and no way in hell would there be a 1-on-1 duel. Yes. I know I have no life. Thank you.

fish-orb responds:

the movie wasnt aanything to do with halo2 online realy it was more to do with a multi player online rpg style movie alot of people are getting confused by this lol you should read the comment

Really Good

I liked it alot. I can't wait to see more eps. Only thing i didn't like was the grammar, but i can let that slide since i can't use proper grammar if my life depended on it. Good Luck with the future eps and i hope the as good or even better then the first!!!!

fish-orb responds:

thank you its good to c some ppl apreshiate my work lol

Lost me in the middle.

Okay, from what I actually saw of this flash, you didn't try your best. Since you did use sprites, the least you could have done was put some more effort into the backgrounds, the tank, and the script could have used some work. Humor is always a plus, and this flash didn't have any, at least not in my opinion. The reason I quit watching halfway through, was because the spelling and grammer was so incredibly bad. If you're going to actually submit your flash, please, pleasepleaseplease at least take the time to run a spellcheck or get somebody to edit it. I couldn't even stand to watch it anymore. I know it may seem trivial, but these things can really stand out and ruin an otherwise good piece of work. Overall, I'd say if you put more effort into you're work, and added more details to the little things, you could be rather succesful.

-LP

(Also, please don't take this review as an insult. I'm actually trying to give you constructive critisism so you can improve your work.)

fish-orb responds:

i apreshiate that but if u had have watched till the end u would have seen some humor in the last scene as well as the out takes so plz i apreshiate the spell checking remark but plz watch it all the way through if u gona coment on the content of the movie