I didn't enjoy this. It wasn't funny enough to be as long as it was, so I just had to keep waiting for it to end, my mind begging fate to give me a payoff that didn't come.
The art, like the length, would have been acceptable if it had been funnier. Wasn't terrible art, just had no style or interest. The people often seemed too long, especially when sitting down.
Everyone had a souther accent? Learn to cover that one up when doing Sam Jackson, buddy.
I was pleased with some of the timing involved in the humor. The background music that rolled in during the boxing scene was fitting, and cued up in a very pace-setting way. If the joke had payed off, that would have been a great scene. Right there you got an A on directing and a D on writing.
Keep up the work and develop the humor into something original and funny- I genuinely believe you could become a very successful and talented flash artist with practice.