Needs some work.
When I first found out that it was going to be a rap, I got a little worried. But, it turned out pretty good.
Rhythm: The beat going while you guys were rapping was pretty solid, but a little too overpowering. I couldn't hear some of the bars because the music was so loud. It's a very simple, very effective fix. Turn it down a little. :]
Rapper 1: Drink some more water before you start rapping, it will take away that spitty sound people are talking about. If you are dehydrated when you start rapping the saliva will get all hung up in your mouth.
Rapper 2: Great job, very clean. Not much to say about yours. Impressed. Obvious winner.
Timing: Near the beginning there was some timing issues, it didn't really lock in with the beat.
Overall: It's a very good run, there is just some little things that will help tremendously.
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