OK...
Im going to say something proabably no one has ever said in a review before....
It was SO good, that you should not have put it in NG and put it somewhere were jackasses won't give it zeros. Go find a better place to post it than this!
Reviews for "Carpe Diem"
imaginative
so was it god or just some hobo in the grave? how did he know it was heaven? were there tourist guides?
not a bad piece, but you couldve done with slowing the text down a little, as i didnt have much time to appreciate the pictures after reading the text. a spelling and grammar check wouldnt have gone amiss either.
When God is dead...
You just wait and see how fast chaos and genocide overun the planet. Hmmm... Christian or Muslim at least I know, death (not suicide) , is something to look forward to, because our earthly bodies die and we go to where our souls belong.
Well, for your sake, i hope you're right.
Peace
Good job
I get what you're tryin to say and that's perfectly fine. Some people rather deny the existence of God, and some believe that he's real. I've got no problem with those who do or don't, but there's no need in making youre religion an excuse in order for hurting someone. And there's also no reason to bash a religion, since there are people who worship it in a good manner.
Very nice work.
(also saw the structure of a Buddhist temple? lol)
good intention
If I understood you right, then you aim was to make people think about their religion and/or their beliefs, right?
But the only thing which really did this was the sentence on the end.
The rest of the flash was more or less meaningless.
This story about the future, where some guy travels to heaven and finds a death god is absolutely obscure and has nothing to do with reality.
Its not that I don't like your flash, but if you're really want to make people think, you should take a more realistic example, in which people can identify themselfs. And more importantent, make it happen now and and in a realistic setting.
But your intention was good and I liked the style, so I give you 7 points.