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Reviews for "Pick Up"

rather good =)

everybody stopppp complaining cuz tht was goood. culd be bttr but so culd everything lol.
i loved it n im a fan 4 constructive criticism (hope i spelt tht ryt..) but wiv things tht good i dnt thing there is a need.
dnt reali no y i love all ur stuff or y im takin my tym 2 review them all...mayb twas ur reveiw of tht ova guy in ur first flash tht got me strted but hey..congrats on the good flash n make a part 2 fast tht dude was hilarious but i wana c im save the day =)

Could be much better than it already is

This movie has all the potential to go all the way to number 1. Graphics are beautiful, nice choice of music, voice acting was alright too. However, it's as if those seperate parts of it don't mix well yet and sort of collide, causing it to look a bit sloppy. It's probably just me, but some things bothered me a little: 1) It's meant to be all chaotic, but at some points there are so many things flashing by that you hardly see them and lose track of what's happening. 2) The story is very vague, maybe a short explanation at the menu? 3) The music and voice acting interfere with eachother, maybe playing different music with dialogue and action scenes could help. 4) Just a slight note, maybe tune up the volume on the explosion sounds, it's like dropping a spoon compared to, for instance, the voices :-)
I'm just trying to help cause I really liked it and hope you'll manage to make it even better next time. Nice flash!

Skaijo responds:

Nice review.

I appreciate your valid critiques and positive tone. I hope I can better blend the storyline and chaotic nature of my flashes in future projects. Thanks for the indepth feedback.

Nice

Wow that was gr8
Lyked the bit were the birds turned into KFC lol

AMAZING! UR AMZING I LOVED IT!!!!!

the only prob it dat i thought it wasn't very funny or did u do dat intentionally. oh EXELLENT!

very good! make part 2

got nothin else to say, it rockz