WHere was the credit for the stand ups ,jokes?
I didn't like the bad animation.
But it was better than nothing at all.
ANd you were really just wanting to put that funny monologue up here.
The humor had me laughing all the way.
I looked to see who wrote the piece & who performed the dialog
Because I couldn't find that ,I marked everything the way I normally would have except for -overall-
If it is all your material , I appologise for the low mark overall.