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Reviews for "Cal-Marts"

haha!

That was really good! Nice graphics and style...a little predictable though but never the less funny. It went on for the exact right amount of time aswell. I think some people make flash cartoons too long or too short on Newgrounds but this was just right. Thanks.

Josh.

Very Well Done

this was a very good demonstration of your talents in flash and offered for a good laugh at the end.

As Far as your graphics go, watch out for your movements and such. The people are wel drawn and look very good but that is nothing if you don't make them move at the same level they are presented. Take some time and make them move smoother, when this is done I will up your overall to a ten.

The sound was very well done and the voicing was well matched to the lips, a thing not many have been able to do. The music is ok, it kind of recycles a bit which annoys some people but other than that I liked it a lot.

Please keep u the good work!

AznPB responds:

XD "Talents in flash"? This is my first time! I got one day of demonstration and I had a week to come up with this minute-and-a-half piece. :D I'm glad you somewhat enjoyed it though. :D

OK

The drawing was good. The premise was amusing. But you have to have some animation in it. There was not enough to deserve anymore than a 2.

nice

nicley done. good idea and art. I think that ill be waching for future work

Pretty Good.

Fairly well drawn, the sounds are also well done.