Meh.
Well, it wasn't bad. I did like the soundtrack, and the graphics were pretty good. The gameplay was a little too simple, and too easy; I just ran all the way east and avoided every single bomb. I'm still avoiding them and racking up points as I type this, actually.
It's a start, but it definitely needs some work... but I think you knew that already, judging by your author remarks.
Looking forward to your next project!