Here's my thoughts....
I saw this, them went and looked at your other submissions.
From looking at those, it's obvious you have the artistic and
animation skill to really make great flash, but your attempts seem
half-hearted, like you give up halfway through the process.
Next time you make one, just stick with it. Flesh out a plot, story and lay you art down over it , and I think you could make frontpage in no time.
A little trippy...
The production values were all there but... it just seemed kinda lost. Keep doing more though, I like your style.
You really didn't need to rate this 17+. That wasn't discernable as nudity.
Hmmm...
I really like the animation, though it could used a bit more, like... a plot er something? maybe there was a plot and I just didnt get it? Meh... ...
Whoow
Hey... I gave it five points. (Just if.... there will be a big point-fight and my vote would change anything with that.)
Again one very cool thing, also without story, but... is this really made with Flash?