10/10
nice game dude send me a message
Reviews for "Black Dragon Phase 1"
ugh
it was great graphics but i had no clue wat i had to do and the instructions were like 15 pages long nd i had to fight bats like 100 bats it was hard an i didnt like at the same time
book
How do I clear the fucking book.
okay
The game is okay but it is way too short and could be a little more challenging.
Room for improvement
Obviously a lot of work went into this game, which is why I rated it above 5.
However, one major imperfection that tends to irk me is the standard of the language. For such a text-heavy game, good English is mandatory. I can see that your problem is not with vocabulary but with structure. You also apparently learnt most of your English phonetically rather than from print, judging from your spelling. My suggestion is to run your work through a proofreader before publishing.
Beyond that, gameplay was rather comprehensively constructed. Just bear in mind that the price to pay for sophistication is filesize. For a 5mb game, the world was way small and the game short. Things like gold, non-wind magic, and being able to put additional skill points in noncombat skills were also generally redundant.
Hope to see future instalments that build upon what you already have.