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And you know what!?!? Most realistic stories DON'T have happy endings!! I am extremely grateful to you for pointing that out to all of the naive teens that visit this site!! And if this trailer is even half as badass as the finished movie, then this chit is going to PWN!!! Keep all of us devoted "Newgroundites" posted on the upcoming release, please!
Lol, You may yet be my most supportive and influential reviewer! Thank you bunches! I plan on spending (what time isnt pushed into art classes, crap classes, and football :P ) Developing Chapter one, there's a total of 3 of us worlking on this, but obviously the other 2 only write teh script, which I will edit! lol, anywho! I hope that CHapter One will crush this trailer and add even more dedication, if not to myself, then to NG all teh way! Thanks for your support!
my thoughts
as for the first half, if i wanted to read, i'd pick up a novel. splice in a few quick action clips to break up the monotony of just sitting and reading the text. it will give a lot more depth to the first half. as for the animated portion, the tumbleweed just sucks. im no animation pro myself, but it looks kinda crap. also, floating battleships that shoot lasers do not mix with dudes in armor fighting with swords. they did that crap in Riddick, and we all know what a blockbuster hit that was.
Personal suggestion: Just make the Title BFA, and drop out the caps on the 'oF' and the 'A'.
make the graphics a little sharper, include a little more storyline, and this could go places.
LOl funny you should emtion that, I just added teh tumble weed for debth, but I kinda liked riddick lol! Anyways! Thank you for your advice, i ws going to have all teh text fade out, but it killed my MB storage space in teh end, so I chopped it all out, But Thanks for your review!
good..
too long for a trailer. trailers are supposed to give you enough to make you interested, but not so much that it gives away a good portion of the movie...unless it's just a really, really long movie, and this is a fitting trailer. whichever. good job!
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Not to sure how long teh series/movie will be, but anwqays, thank your for your review, hopefully It will turn out better than this!
Interesting.
I liked it. My only problem with it was the length. It's a little long for a trailer.
Your telling me lol, It was a pain in teh @$$ choppping this up to fit under %MB, then when i went to bitmap preview, turns out all I had to do was compress teh song and it would've worked! BTW teh song ended up being 704KB right now, started at 4.78 MB!
Looks interesting...
Looks good. Although I'm usually not big on trailers, this one was truly well done, and I'm actually looking forward to the movie now. Please make it a point to actually release it, 'kay? *laugh*
Watch your attention to detail; eyelashes and eyebrows go *behind* hair, not in front of it. Your backgrounds could be a bit more detailed as well. Use gradients and shading to make your scenes look a little less flat. Those little details will make the difference between an okay flash and a blockbuster release.
Good luck, and I can't wait to see the full version in September.
P. S. "Affect" not "effect". Look up the difference online. Details. :)
Trust me, English is my last favorite class! lol. Anyways, Yes I am going to release Chapter One, and hopefully it will turn out alot better than this ever was! Thanbk You for all rou support and info! I Will be working on backgrounds for a while now! TY!