Not bad motha fucka
I like the melody and the way it change. it sound like u put some savage gaps in it in the middle part. Only one thing i might say, for the beat try to do more diversity in it. The melody is good, is not bad. The beat is ok, it sound like a simple beat only. Try to put the same effort u did for the melody to the beat, and then u'll see some better results. ...more cuts and stuff, if u know what i mean.