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Reviews for "Trouble at th' Bar"

First flash?

Very good, for your first. It kind of reminded me of old Bugs Bunny 'toons. Keep it up.

Tails-23 responds:

Wow an old Bugs Bunny cartoon... kewl.

Thanks for you input

its a good flash considering its your first...

The graphics were ok, but your plot made it a bit less important. Funny flash, never expected the hero to be such a wimp though lol.

Not bad for a first timer.

Here's mistake #1. Don't tell people that this is your first flash. That can lead to auto blaming. The graphics weren't great, but I can tell you put work into them. The music was a good choice. The sound effects, though sparse, came in at the right time. The story was confusing, but interesting. If you keep working at it, you could make some very good flashes.

LOL that was pretty funny...

the story was wackey and it didn't really matter that the animation was shotty, cause it all worked together anyway...

it was worth a smile and a few chuckles...XD... keep at it...it wasn't half bad...

END.

Tails-23 responds:

Well if you got a few laughs out of it I'm happy

well...

get more sound and better graphics and a story and then il will give you a great five i liked it though so 2/5 good luck with future flashs <("<)