Interesting, But Was Too Slow
The idea for this flash was very original, but it just took a while to get to the payoff. When making surreal flash, it's always best to make sure you have your audience at full attention. The scene where they threw the rocks at the flowers could have gone by a bit faster, tweening the rocks with few frames can make them move significantly faster. Overall, the style of the artwork was done very well. It reminded me a bit of Davd Firth.
Very well done!
I love the dark and creepy setting of the whole animation, reminds me of some of ther others ive seen on NG. Anyways, The animation runs fairly smooth, but I began to lose intrest about halfway through the animation, until the end, that is.
Maybe cut out some of the less important parts?
Oh, By the way, That sound loop got annoying very fast, id suggest you change it.
Otherwise, Job well done! Keep it up!
i couldnt watch it all i ran out of time any way
that was freaky for the first 30 seconds i saw lol