eh
I think the animation fits the story, kind of crappy. It's not funny to laugh at homeless people. Although I thought it was funny when he said 'no'. And then that part where he says 'Burn the house down' Oh yeah. Good stuff. And I wish I could just spit on my landlord. Lol
it woz quite good
i liked it quite a bit tho animation needs work am gona watch ur others now ther prob beta than this so i shud like them give ur self a pat on the back for a job well done n for all those ppl readin this watch this flash its good
yeah, watch the others for sure, especially #4. In #4 the animation is much better.
Not great, not ok, and not awful
Pretty horrible. The animation needs work, there shouldn't have even been a FLASH. Duck Luck would be more like someone decideing to view this garbage.
Well it's better than nothing, which is what you have made.
Good Job..
lmao dude ur pretty amazing, ive tried making some flash :( n im really crap, y cnt i be as good as u?... neways well good job on this dude i rate u..
Thanks a lot, man. Don't worry, I've probably been doing Flash a lot longer than you, just keep up with it and you'll get better eventually.
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nice work-keep on with it
i think that you have got potential. You should just keep on working with the series and working with flash and I am sure it will better. So far I can see that you have got potential but it isn’t something that will make the ladies scream if you know what I mean (hey that actually rhymed). I liked the way the camera panned and zoomed in and out when they were both talking. You know duck was on the coach and the boy was left to him and it was some nice switching between both characters during the conversation. VERY pleasant for the eye and shows you have got some good knowledge of flash. Talking about the skills the animations and graphics did the job and you are already on the right way. For example you are doing frame by frame animation and not some “lazy” tweening so you get two thumbs up from me.
I wasn’t satisfied with the burning house. It should have been way more EXTREME. There was only some “baby fire” coming out of the windows but nothing that looked like their house was really just getting destroyed. About the humour: it could have really funnier. I mean it always can be funnier but your stuff only made me smile and didn’t give me the big LOL. I have to admit I got surprised when duck spit at the landlord because I thought he was actually going to say “FUCK YOU!” but in the end the difference wasn’t too big. So you have got the technical skills for producing a good series. Now you just need some comedy skills. Go out, sit under a tree and write down stuff that you think is hilarious. Good luck on it and you can always PM me on Newgrounds :)
Thanks for all of the words but I really don't think I deserve a 4. I spent like 200 hours on this...
w/e