A quite good movie
I liked the comedic timing, the detail and the plot.
here's some things to improve upon:
when you test the movie, make sure there's no blank white parts on screen, the spots are small but it really catches my eye. that's why whenever I make a background, I make sure to cover more than the whole screen.
I see that you changed some of the clocks around, but I can see the old symbols in certain keyframes, so make sure you proofwatch it for any goofs like that, including when the caption said "cranberry".
I'd also suggest finding new voices to add to the speakonia engine, the old variety seems limited after what Strangeclock used.