The melody is good, really good, but I just think you really should master the way you manage sound effect.
Percussions aren't such attractive, and these are the basis of an electro soundtrack. Make sure they aren't crappy.
Add more background effects. There were few, and they weren't giving a huge atmospheric feeling of the song.
Principal key notes were simple, but on a fast an intense track like this, it is better to keep them so. Just make sure to improve these two points above :)
Good song overall.