it wasn't the quality that made it suck!!
it stupid without the stupid quality. there really isn't nothing you can do to improve it!! drop it and work on another totally different lame attmpt to make it passed the judging stage....
no one cares to see a gai duck see some gai piece of candy just to get the gai candy stolen by some gai looking bird, and then see the gai duck taking out a gai looking dildo thing and shoot the gai looking bird to smitherines...
when people said to improve they meant improve in your plot not to see som gai duck see so gai piece of candy just to get the gai candy stolen by some gai looking bird, and then see the gai duck taking out a gai looking dildo thing and shoot the gai looking bird to smitherines...
see how easy that plot was i just sumerized your story 2 times....