(( Nice story ))
~~REVIEW~~
This had a nice story with some good depth to it mainly in the story though and the characters were notbad either and it does have that dark noir feel which i really liked, very nice work on this one, maybe some compression would be nice though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just abit of compression of the file, it seemed to get up there in size.
~~OVERALL~~
A very welldone story should make for a neat series if it goes that far.
~X~
Sweet!
Although the sound wasn't of the greatest quality, the story and other details of it were extraordinarily well done. The mixture of a Film Noir and Sin City type was highly noticeable and awesome.
If future movies are as good as this, if not better, then expect the greatest for anything.
Very nice man!
Dude it's very cool! I tought u would never finish it, but u did! Great work! Nice graphics, the only disadvantage is your mic... =)
grerat dlash...bad sound
Great work on the graphics...But very bad voice acting...You should have maybe:
1) Bought a new microphone
2) Got some people to help you with them
3) Make subtitles...
But still, great work!
Intersting
i thought the plot was pretty well thought out and executed but the voice was difficult to understand as well as ....well, unsuitable. be good if you did a remake of this.
btw, when the bald guy comes across "Flaminco," the narrator's voice cracked. lol