Nice!
Change it a bit more as you go through....more change in rythem.
Nice!
Change it a bit more as you go through....more change in rythem.
Yes, now I know which mistakes I made in this song. Thank you for listening:)
don't like it
you are turning the same melody through all song. boring. -.-
Yes, I do. And yes, it can be boring for some people. But thanks for listening.
Faultless
I just...Love your music
Please continuing on this path
(sorry for my english)
Thank you so much :)
What I see
Hearing this song reminded me of the first detailed story I ever wrote,
I world created by a story teller, the man is sucked into his own story and must live though the good, and the bad, as he knows the inevitable end draws nearer.. He falls in love with one of his own characters, and eventually the 4th wall is broken, but he does not return home, instead he shapes a new world sacrificing himself to give the one he loves a place to spend the rest of her life, without sadness or hate.
thanks for letting me listen ^^
Again, Amazing!
You must continue! But I would make the sounds sharper. Like David Orr.
I think sounds in this song are OK, but thank you for opinion :)