Bad Song
Good Remix, though.
I like the dark theme you brewed into it, and i'm almost sad that there was no rearranging or slight slicemixing of the lyrics.
The fact that you just took the song and tinted it, no matter how epic, doesn't stand to reason. Particularly if you want to call it a Dance song, it would sound good if you did something to the lyrics.
I also reccomend removing the "deep" section from 2:34 to 2:51, which I only mention because i thought it had a poor taste to it.
I'd also reccomend some sort of an instrumental stretch. Seeing as how you seem to still be working on this, my criticism is aimed at this song in particular and not future projects.
Still, good work.
--Fox