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Reviews for "Paparazzi - Dirty Mix"

Bad Song

Good Remix, though.

I like the dark theme you brewed into it, and i'm almost sad that there was no rearranging or slight slicemixing of the lyrics.

The fact that you just took the song and tinted it, no matter how epic, doesn't stand to reason. Particularly if you want to call it a Dance song, it would sound good if you did something to the lyrics.

I also reccomend removing the "deep" section from 2:34 to 2:51, which I only mention because i thought it had a poor taste to it.

I'd also reccomend some sort of an instrumental stretch. Seeing as how you seem to still be working on this, my criticism is aimed at this song in particular and not future projects.

Still, good work.
--Fox

b0b3rt responds:

I'll keep it in mind.
Generally I'm a purist when it comes to vocals (though honestly it's just an excuse for being terrible at slicing).

one suggestion

the synth going durring the chorus... i would try putting it on every beat instead of like a dance bass line inbetween every beat

b0b3rt responds:

Alright, thanks for the idea. I'll see how it sounds.

Lol?

I don't know what everyone's problem, grow up kids. This is a little, choppy, but nothing to cry over.

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks =) Check back in around 5-6 hours for the update..

Potential

This song does have potential but you need to work on it.

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks.

Not badly mastered but needs work....

just work on it alittle bit more to fix it up right

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks.