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Reviews for "Hal Goes camping"

Nice drawings

^^Good Points^^
I really like your drawing and shading, it really looks nice. Very professional and leaves a good impression.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the sound effects at all, it just didn't sound right. The storyline was decent, kind of cute but not something I really like that much. You've got great graphical talent, now just work on the storylines more.

I dig your style

I like the way you draw.

You have a good sense of timing and style, I hope to see more from you.
Try making something a bit longer, more sounds maybe, or just keep it short and sweet. I won't tell you how to do your thing.

I liked it tho. Keep it up!

nice

kewl flash dud. keep it up :P

Interesting, but...

1. Don't use the same sounds over and over again, it gets annoying to the viewer.
2. Hal should actually say something.
3. Pretty good, but try and write a script for something you'd like to make, and then make it, otherwise you just have a short little idea.

pretty good

I liked it, but it needs to be longer and a bit funnier. I can see this becoming a big newgrounds series, keep at it I like where this is going