Good sense of humour
I like this flash, but I'm not sure if others will...
Maybe you could work on your timing when the jokes come in, and maybe put boxes around the text, to make it easier to read.
You've already got the length fine, just work on some of the bits here and there.
Just a little bit of constructive criticism for you xD
This flash has potential and I'd love to see a new, better, more `Advanced` Part 2.
Anyway, well done!
(Loved the music!)
Good, but needs work.
It would be SO much beter if you added voices or at least sound effects instead of the same cheery music and text dialogue(sp?).
Amusing but i've seen this a million times
Bloopers are usually a good laugh but ive seen them so many times it starts to get a little stale...the movie was good but the music started grating afer a few minutes
Hey much better than your other!
Still had the same sound looping problem here, I'll give you a short tutorial. At the end of the movie click on the last frame in the timeline and go under actions-timeline control-stop double click on stop and it will make your movie end there. Now for a play again button. Go under common libraries, and take out any of the buttons that have text on them, go under it's edit menu, and change the text too Replay, now put the Button on the last from then click on the button, and go under actions, type in on (release) {*NOW CLICK ON THE BUTTON THAT SAYS GO TO AND PLAY, WHICH SHOULD MAKE A PARENTHESIS APPEAR AFTER SOME TEXT, TYPE IN THE PARENTHESIS 1} make sure that it has { at the beggining and } at the end, I can help you some more if you IM me, hunterbn10 on AIM, mangaman81@yahoo. com on YIM, and on MSN.
Pretty good...
I liked it. My only problem was that it ended too fast.