Nice for a W.I.P.
Considering this is a Work in progress as you said it was, and just a few hours of works was done, I think it sounds very neat. Sounds fit for some super hyper-active battle.
I look forward to see a complete version of this. Because it has lots of potential in my eyes.
Well, this sure is interesting..
First of all, I give you a quite low score, since this portion doesn't make it very well on its own. I really miss an intro to bring up the atmosphere a bit. I even think you should use half of the songs total length to prepare for this portion, or even more. This could work as a very powerful climax.
I hope you find my comment useful, and good luck to you!
final version will be about 3:50 in length and will include an intro, bridge and outro. As said in the description I've only started working on this several hours ago so a lot has to be done. Thanks for the review though en be sure to check it out when it's finished!