Odd..
The character in the front was probably enough in my opinion. He was just very big and with the other two guys the screen seems very full and distracting. Perhaps if one of the doctor looking guys was removed and the big guy in the middle could be shifted over a little bit while one of the doctors could then shift over again giving more "white" space and allow people to focus on the piece of art better. (Just more space because things can be hard too look at when cluttered)
I want to ask why you put some color on the two doctors? It just seems that it goes against your style. I also like the sky that you did here, but again it's a bit crowded as the words seem too close to the sky and too close to the big guy in the middle. Unlesss that's what you were going for the entire time.
I can also see this being made too crowded on purpose. Perhaps as the guy says Help me out here, it's because the two doctor guys want to help him for some reason, in which he doesn't need help for (since they do look like death and very creepy for some reason) so hence he does need help, but it's to get away from the people who are trying to help him in the first place. O.o (I hope that makes sense. It does to me at least) But then that would explain why everything was cluttered because it gives an impression that the big guy just needs to get the hell out of there.
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