That was decent
You've got some potential. keep working.
Reviews for "starwell ep 7: Mr. Jello"
Story line?
that was not funny and it had no stoey line i dont think it makes any sence at all so im just gonna say work on makeing them longer and have a story line.
JAMce responds:
well... it's a 2 parter.. so yeah- this is only one half of the story line..
me no likey...
Uhh yea that wasnt funny.
No humor
JAMce responds:
sorry man... maybe- if you went and watched the other one's you'd dig this one more.
ehhhh?
i didn't watch the other episodes, but it looked kinda weird how the star guy was acting weird 'hehhehehehe' and grinning evily.
JAMce responds:
I edited the file... I put the second part of the ep right in with this one.. watch it again.. see if it's better to you?
Neat!
This episode I liked best so far. Using a couple of celebrities never hurts. Finally your work gets an award it deserves. Good job!