It seemed as though something was missing on that one. I'll be honest and say that I am not entirely sure what it is. I like parodies of NG users as much as the next guy, heck, they're freaking hilarious. It is just that something here wasn't QUITE right.
Perhaps if you had spent a little more time with some of the true gems, and made sly and/or witty comments about them or if you somehow accented certain ones a little more than just exploding them - which I will say WAS a good and creative idea in and of itself, it is just that by itself, it wasn't enough.
In the end though, your recipe is almost perfected, and your art/sound/technical aspects, though on the simpler side, were all crisp and in order. Good job, and lets see what little aspects will be changed for the next round of making fun of all the abusive reviewers.