Well...
The intro was pretty long and right when i thought it was about to start it stopped, so...yeah.
Reviews for "LOZ: UO Prologue"
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I like it and i look forward to seeing more. In my oppinion if you were to drop the text boxes and use a darker print it might look a little more slick, but it is also good as it is now.
looking forward
to seeing that looks like a good idea.