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ok, this song has a lot of potential and i do really like what you have i do have a few suggestions though if i may..
what worked:
1) The progressive nature of this song is pretty awesome. The vibe you created with the synth was awesome and the bass just following is pretty cool as well.
2) The end is perfect too, I would suggest adding a distorted guitar though... some power chords can do this song wonders.
3) In my opinion this can be taken to a whole new level if you want. IMO, the riff at 1:23 can be played again later on a guitar and have the song progress with that in mind instead of the synth. It might end up being like 8 minutes or something but that is a pretty good length of a progressive jazzy song...
what did not work:
1) The drums seemed out of place most of the time and did not sync up right.
2) This song is felt like a half told story, i am left wanting more to a point of trying a post-metal cover of it or something. In other words, work more on it because right now it seems like a sweet jam session. You need to make it a song.
hope that helped man..
~peace
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